From Judith in East Hampton, NY:
Nan, the first version of "You Are My Home" in the first show was incredibly real and
powerful. The love between brother and sister really worked throughout the story. I found myself
sobbing during that song in the prison. The acting was amazing. I will always miss that first
run. [Christine] Andreas played Marguerite with the energy that was true to the character in
text. I always wondered why the story changed so much. I know there was a new director, but why
did he change the strength and conviction of Marguerite? Why did they cut so much of her music?
Did you always agree with the changes? And finally, will it ever come out on video as other
productions have? Thank you.
Thursday, 22 July 2004
Dear Judith,
There is no simple answer to all of your questions. The first version of "Pimpernel" was just
plain going to die unless we made changes. It also needed changes. I agree with you that the
original "You Are My Home" worked better as a brother/sister song in the prison and I wrote it
for exactly that. However, when we started "Pimpernel 2", the decision was made to reinstate the
song "I'll Forget You", which was only heard on the original concept album and was the primary
reason that Rachael York wanted to do the show. All of us struggled mightily to find the right
spot for "I'll Forget You", and it always came back to the prison. No one wanted to cut "You Are
My Home", and so the decision was made to make "You Are My Home" the new wedding song. I was
essentially OK with this decision because I had heard of many couples using "You Are My Home"
for their wedding song, but I sorely missed (and still do) the original wedding song, "Believe".
I can't say that I agree with you that Marguerite's strength and conviction changed in
"Pimpernel 2", and I believe that she actually had more music in version 2 since we did the full
version of "Storybook" and added "I'll Forget You". Story changes were necessary in order to
create a more vibrant show with better pacing and momentum. As far as my agreeing with changes,
rest assured that in the theatre no one can change a single word of the script without the
writer's approval. All changes made were done by mutual agreement between Bobby Longbottom and
myself, and, of course, Frank Wildhorn if it was a musical change. One is not always thrilled
with every change, but the basic reality of musical theatre is collaboration and compromise, and
sometimes suggested changes unexpectedly blossom into magic. For example, I wanted to keep "The
Creation of Man" exactly as it was in version 1, with the Prince of Wales present throughout,
but Bobby had a totally new conception of the number. I compromised on this and the result was
what is now probably the most gloriously funny sequence in the show.
To answer your last question, the show was only shot on video for the Lincoln Center
archives, and they did thankfully do videos of both "Pimpernel 1" and "Pimpernel 2". The only
possibility of a VHS/DVD of "Pimpernel" would be if there was another new major production and a
company such as HBO or PBS wanted to shoot it. Let's hope!
Judith, thank you for your really thoughtful questions. My best to you,
Nan